User talk:ASAP David

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Electronic Lock Bumping (June 24)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

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KylieTastic (talk) 15:35, 24 June 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Electronic Lock Bumping has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Electronic Lock Bumping. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 10:02, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

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Thank you. Drm310 🍁 (talk) 15:42, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

Style
I made a comment at Teahouse but also wanted to say same here - the style of your draft is completely not suited for Wikipedia. There is no "We." Look at several other articles for style. See Lock (security device) or Associated Locksmiths of America as examples. David notMD (talk) 16:14, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for replying so fast. You are absolutely right, the article needs to read like an encyclopedia article, not a news publication or online article. --ASAP David (talk) 23:39, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Electronic Lock Bumping (September 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RoySmith was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Electronic Lock Bumping and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Electronic Lock Bumping, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Electronic_Lock_Bumping Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:RoySmith&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Electronic_Lock_Bumping reviewer's talk page].
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-- RoySmith (talk) 22:58, 18 September 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Electronic Lock Bumping


Hello, ASAP David. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Electronic Lock Bumping".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Huff slush7264  Chat With Me  18:08, 10 October 2018 (UTC)