User talk:ASP Janis/sandbox

Great Job!
The work you have done seems pretty sound! Maybe just include more information on and develop some concepts you have started talking about in your general overview. Make sure to mention the topics you will talk about in your general overview, as in subtopics, of how the tea is prepared, what cultural events or customs the tea is used, etc. Overall, off to a great start!--Connieoh13 (talk) 16:38, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Very nice!
This is a very interesting piece and I would love to learn more about this topic. There is a lot of potential to expand on this article so be sure to include details such as the origins and customs that surround this tea as well as go into the complexities of the preparation and cultural uses. As you continue the article expand on these points and go into further detail. In order to further build upon your article create links to other pages such as "oolong tea" and "Mountain tea". This will give the reader necessary background information. Great work overall, be sure to check the flow as well as grammar. Hope to see more soon !Sophia8004 (talk) 06:31, 22 February 2018 (UTC)