User talk:ASurette/Auoindaon

Lead I thought that your lead was really good. You gave good context and dates which help to give the reader a general time line. The detail in the facts you gave are helpful and do not show any signs of bias. I do think that if it is possible you hound find some more sources to help black up the facts you are writing abound. I also feel that you should add where you use quiets from your cited source.

Context I feel that the context you gave is useful to the article and does not seem unnecessary. The flow of the essay if good and is easy to follow along with. I do think if would be beneficial is you would add titles about sections where you change topics in order to make it easier for the reader to follow. I understand that it is hard to find when the chiefs were born and when they died but if you can find that information I think it would be helpful to add.

Tone and Balance I feel that throughout your works that your tone remains neutral and unbiased. You did not add any words that would make the reader think that you are biased in one way or another.

Sources and references I saw in your sandbox that there is one source and I feel that it would be very helpful for you to find some more sources. I also think that if you have any direct quotes from your source than you should add citations as well.