User talk:ATC/September—December 2012/Archive 11

Late response
Sorry, ATC, I got a little busy and haven't had time until tonight to really look at the page. I looked at the list of FAs (in the media section) and couldn't find a lot that aren't single show episodes. I sort of randomly chose this (Firefly (TV series)) that maybe you can use as a template. But I haven't looked to see when it was promoted, and it does use bulleted lists.

Some feedback on your article: I think it's a bit busy. Go ahead and remove the flags MOS:FLAG. Remove the bolding in the boxes, remove at lease as many blue quote boxes as you can. Per WP:Overlinking, make sure you don't have items linked more than once in the text.

I think some of the bulleted lists can be pulled into prose sections. At this point go ahead and tidy it as much as you can (even the infobox has a little too much detail) so that it's less busy and more readable.

It's on my watchlist now, so I'll keep an eye on it. Ping me when you've done all the above and then when I have time, I'll swing through and see what can be done about prosifying the lists. Also in the meantime, consider looking at other pages to follow. Sorry this is a lot; sort of a mini-review, but enough to give you some ideas. Truthkeeper (talk) 01:03, 18 September 2012 (UTC)


 * That's okay. In the infobox should I remove the writers and directors section? ATC . Talk 23:41, 19 September 2012 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure. I like your infoboxes, so let me give it some thought. I'm up to my eyeballs with work for the next few days and won't get back here until late in the weekend. In the meantime I think you should do everything else the reviewer requested - remove flags, remove bolding, remove some detail. Stuff like that. Take it slowly and play around with it. I'll get back to you as soon as I can. Truthkeeper (talk) 18:39, 20 September 2012 (UTC)