User talk:ATelferSCR

Rhodesian African Rifles
It's so nice you vetted this on Facebook and somebody named Andy wrote it, but its still unreferenced. Andy and Facebook vetting is not a reference.

Take a look at any other article and you will notice that the RAR article is different from EVERY other article. Try looking at Rhodesian Light Infantry (that is a good article) or Rhodesian Armoured Corps
 * 1) NO SHOUTING IN THE ARTICLE
 * 2) No bolding everywhere
 * 3) No addition of red everywhere
 * 4) Article had a lede before, but you blasted it away.
 * 5) You removed references.
 * 6) You never once added a reference.

At a minimum, there needs to be a reference for every paragraph. If you used a book, give what page you used. If you used a website, give the website. Look at the other pages give for how to do a decent article. If you have questions, ask at the Teahouse. Bgwhite (talk) 05:49, 4 February 2015 (UTC)