User talk:AWDfall/new sandbox

The information seems organized well and is easy to follow without anything being repeated or unnecessary. My only input would be to add more sources that make the information seem more reliable.

Perhaps it would be useful to make note of the individual women and have a section in which you give maybe one or two sentences on the main artists and how they contribute to the group.Justcomics (talk) 16:13, 9 November 2018 (UTC)Justcomics

The article is very well written and objective. The currently existing article is void of direct reference and doesn't address all relevant aspects of the mural. Regarding criticism, I would only suggest to add references. Thankfully there are three relevant sources on the original page that could contribute to Megan's research. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brandonhoilett (talk • contribs) 15:55, 13 November 2018 (UTC)