User talk:AZBigDog

Hi AZBigDog,

Nice to see you put the ((hangon)) tag on Darth Knights of Freedom. Can I be of assistance in helping you improve the page? (I'm the one who put the ((db-bio)) tag on it).

One big no-no in the article is the first-person "chat". Remember wiki is not a web forum... the article should in the end look like an encyclopedia article, not a blog or web-post.

Another thing is notability. Do you know of any websites discussing this group? Not the group themselves, but a third-person discussion? That would be good to link to.

I'll watch this page, so feel free to reply here. -- SB_Johnny  | talk 00:28, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

Actually yes, the first-person "chat" is a quote that I was given by the group's founder. I could re-write it in such a way as to re-tell his story rather than quote him. Would that help? Also the group has a website (Can't link to it since it's password protected) but it is referred to at just about all the web forums on which they post. --AZBigDog 00:34, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

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I'm sorry I deleted your article. Please read the links above regarding Wikipedia policies, notably WP:V, WP:RS and WP:CITE and consider resubmitting your page. Regards, - FrancisTyers · 00:37, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

AW man, someone was working with me on getting the article in shape. :( He was helping me to make it fit the guidelines. --AZBigDog 00:39, 5 August 2006 (UTC)


 * Sorry! Well, the guy who was helping you has copied it into you userspace (see the link below). Work on it in there, and then if you manage to get it to fit the policies, feel free to move it back in! :) - FrancisTyers · 00:49, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

Still here
Oops, looks like an admin decided not to hang on. Don't panic, I have a copy. Give me a minute and I'll make you a userpage. SB_Johnny | talk 00:41, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

OK, here it is. Don't forget to watch the page. I'm going offline for a bit, but I'll try to help you figure it out later on... just see what you can do with it until then. SB_Johnny | talk 00:43, 5 August 2006 (UTC)