User talk:Aadedoyi/sandbox

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I'm an online ambassador for your WMST 250: Women, Art, and Culture (2014 Q3) class and have just stopped by to provide a quick review and add what I hope will be helpful comments.

You've done a nice job on this article. It's well-organized, well-written, and content is cited. You've provided background and career information.

The only real issue that I see is that the biography from the subject's website is used as a citation in several places. It is not considered a reliable source because it is a primary source of a living person. If you could find another source, that would be good. One option is this site, which also has an image that you may want to use as a fair use image.

It would be nice to see the list of collections sorted in some fashion, alphabetically, etc. That's not a big deal, though.

I'll check in on you again, and I'll be watching this page if you have any questions or comments.-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 05:18, 1 November 2014 (UTC)