User talk:Aajoseph12/sandbox

Kelly Wallert Peer Review
The content that you added is relevant to the topics that we are learning in class and appears to be neutral which is great because it follows Wikipedia‘s guidelines. I think you did a great job of adding new content that’s backed up by reliable and secondary source information and having a diverse spectrum of authors that you were referencing. The content you added seems to overall improve the quality of the article, it helps to come across as more complete. I think its classification section is super strong and helped show the importance of cyberspace. I think that your content could be improved upon by possibly adding more in-text citations and possibly adding more sections. I think the more background that you give on the topic it’ll make it easier for other users to be intrigued and want to read more of the article.

Response to Peer Review
Thanks for your feedback! I'm glad that you realized that my classifications section is strong. I will try to add more in-text citations to improve my article, thank you for that suggestion! I was planning on adding more sections because I realized this one section was getting too long so it was great to have someone else echo that thought. Aajoseph12 (talk) 00:29, 25 October 2020 (UTC)Ashley Joseph