User talk:Aakanksha gupta

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Hello, Aakanksha gupta, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Article feedback
A good start on the article draft in your sandbox, but I wanted to bring some issues to your attention before you move the article into mainspace:


 * The article should begin with a lead section which summarizes the entire article and defines the subject. It should not merely introduce the background or context of the subject, that material is better placed in other sections of the article.
 * It's not clear who or what "BROTHERHOOD" is or why the name is in all capital letters. Is this an organization?  Who is it comprised of?
 * Only the first word in each header should be capitalized, with the exception of words which are always capitalized like the names of people or the title of books.
 * Your article is overly reliant on primary sources. Wikipedia encourages the use of reliable, independent secondary sources.   The training module Evaluating Articles and Sources can help you with this, or consider seeking assistance from your instructor or campus library.

Please let us know if you have any questions. Rob (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:14, 22 December 2016 (UTC)