User talk:Aalberti

Your submission at Articles for creation: Christine Mitchell (October 23)
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K.e.coffman (talk) 04:13, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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MaynardClark (talk) 03:11, 26 October 2018 (UTC)

Potential
I think this is a GREAT article that deserves lots of professional attention. While Christine Mitchell has produced much and continues to produce much, there is little here about context in which her contributions are historically notable. I think that interpretive historical work could make this good and worthwhile article a really good and even possibly great article. Maybe a few extra photos that are not mostly in a lecturing posture. MaynardClark (talk) 03:11, 26 October 2018 (UTC)

I've been working on it
As reviewing administror, I tend to specialize in the field of academic biographies. A WP article is different from a CV--a CV lists everything, an encyclopedia article includes what will be of interest to the general public. Am encyclopedia article says things once only, with a few key highlights repeated in the lede paragraph and the infobox. An encyclopedia article gives things in chronological order, and if it presents something in a list, it does not repeat it as a paragraph.
 * I have cleaned up the infobox. I have rearranged the sections in standard format.
 * The next step is to remove the multiple listings, and make a more compact article.  DGG ( talk ) 00:12, 7 January 2019 (UTC)