User talk:Aaleksanian/my sandbox

Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
Name of student reviewer: Wikipedia User: M.Caban

Date of review: 4/12/2013

Name of editor: Wikipedia User: Aaleksanian

URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aaleksanian/my_sandbox

Length of edit (too long/too short): Image (needed/appropriate): Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed. N/A Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych): Wikiformatting:
 * 1) Good length.
 * 1)  Has appropriate image.
 * 1)  Information provided was accurate to the book information.
 * 1) Editor contribution to the article page is an accurate I/O Psy topic and is found in the textbook.
 * 1) Bullets and citation are correctly done.

Grammar & composition: Other comments: M.Caban (talk) 20:18, 14 April 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) Add information or delete the sentence "There has been lots of research done on that topic".
 * 2) On the last sentence you may want to fix "might be not beneficial " Example: may not be beneficial
 * 1) Adding more bullets under "the benefits of cubicles" can be more beneficial but not necessarily needed.
 * 2) If it can be found, a link to an outside page or Wiki page can be beneficial.