User talk:Aaleksanian/sandbox

Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback
Name of student reviewer: Wikipedia User: M.Caban

Date of review: 4/12/2013

Name of editor: Wikipedia User: Aaleksanian

URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aaleksanian/sandbox

Length of edit (too long/too short)
 * Good length

Image (needed/appropriate)
 * If it can be found, an image will be appropriate.

Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit)
 * Information provided was accurate to the book information.

Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed
 * N/A

Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych)
 * Editor contribution to the article page is an accurate I/O Psy topic and is found in the textbook.

Wikiformatting
 * Adding some more Wiki fancy formatting can be beneficial, but not necessarily needed.
 * Has correct and accurate links to other Wiki pages

Grammar & composition
 * Space is needed between the words "housework,childcare,shopping"
 * Add (an) between "with" and "outside" on the sentence: "and cooking with outside job"

Other comments
 * None

M.Caban (talk) 20:21, 14 April 2013 (UTC)

this is not a test
Dear Armine, You should reply to that editor, they are trying to be helpful. You need to remember that in Wikipedia talk, primary sources is different from a primary article. If you read what Lova Falk says, an undergrad textbook is just okay - published articles would be better.

You didn't provide any context to where you'd put your material. You don't have that much info for a new section. LF pointed out a real problem with your idea.

Also, you chose a "hot" article on Wikipedia to edit. The article is long, well established and under the scrutiny of lots or editors. The editors will put you through the wringer on this one, but you know that adds points to your grade.

Dr Ashton (talk) 17:55, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

more
you could try to rewrite what you have and fit it into the "causes" section of the article. Dr Ashton (talk) 17:58, 22 April 2013 (UTC)