User talk:Aaliyah 15/sandbox

Aaliyah, I take it that this is what you plan to do as your Wiki editing project? What section do you plan to put these facts under in the current article? Be aware that when you paraphrase them you will need to take the bias out of that language, because the way these sources have presented them, there's definitely an opinion that's coming through.Tchrtchr (talk) 17:50, 7 November 2017 (UTC)

Temember that there are some specific steps you need to take to fully evaluate the article--look again at the assignment directions on our Wiki page. You have to address particular questions, for example, and also click on some of the links to see if they work and to evaluate the sources. Do that for full credit for this part of the assignment.Tchrtchr (talk) 18:20, 7 November 2017 (UTC)