User talk:Aaliyahx33/sandbox

Peer Review Katelyn White 1) Neutrality- In the limited information given, the edits appear to be unbiased so far, but the edits aren't all in the sandbox yet. 2) Sufficient Change- Not enough information about the future changes has been given yet to know if it will be sufficient, but we see that she has evaluated what needs to be changed. 3)Citation- So far we see two citations, both of which seem credible. 4) Language, Tone, and Clarity- Insufficient amount of information, however what we do have seems to be clear and factual. Tone seems to be informative. 5)Assignment instructions- So far there is not enough information, meaning the guidelines have not been met. At most we see two edits with little information.

Peer review- Jalanie Lawrence
I think you have a good start because it looks like the website has a lot of edits you can add. you mentioned education level and poverty and I think that can be two good points to use. You mentioned that there data is from the 2000s, so maybe you can add more up to date data and if you want, you can put it in a data table. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jalanielawrence (talk • contribs) 18:33, 30 April 2018 (UTC)

peer review response
Will add more information like said above and also try to use information from other sub topics. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aaliyahx33 (talk • contribs) 18:36, 30 April 2018 (UTC)