User talk:Aalmuk/Barbara Sykes (artist)

Citations There should be at least one more citation in the intro, maybe like a secondary source to confirm exhibitions The first sentence seems like it should cite from a source, it seems a little like your own thoughts. There also should be more citations in the Early Influence section. You definitely need to find some for the career section because right now there are none. Your content of information seems pretty thorough!

Intro The intro could use some editing, I think you might want to start off more broadly and then move into specific information. For example, start with who she is, what her work focused on, why it is important, and maybe mention one of her more notable accomplishments.

Early Influences Possibly talk about why the EVE and IP influenced her before talking about what they are Move the last two paragraphs into the intro? They're more about her impact than what influenced her

Grants and Awards Find different sources for this information, from publications or the organizations themselves

-Nolan Barry and Ashley Peresie (March 9, 2020)