User talk:Aaron.somerville/sandbox

Finished with my "Drilling Rig" article
I had very few edits to make with this article due to a large amount of prior editing. The talk page had tons of comments regarding references and accuracy of information that was addressed and fixed in the article. Regarding Content, very few suggestions were provided to the author from me, but I posted on the article talk page that a few of the subsections regarding technological issues and advancements with drilling were not relevant to the main topic of "Drilling rigs". The majority of the article had information regarding the different drilling rigs and the different materials that each drilled for. When the article began to express issues regarding drilling, It became somewhat opinionated rather than neutral. I posted to inform future editors that this sections should be suggested for different Wikipedia Articles.

Finished with "Football Team"
This article had a very large amount of issues regarding content. My edits have been finalized regarding copyediting but the amount of content that is needed is far more than I could add in the time provided. In order to help the author and future editors, I used a reference from a scholarly article regarding the importance of College football teams. This source could help the author and editors in the future by provided them with a source to view containing content on football teams. This page received very little edits regarding structure but had an issue with its tone. The article does not have a neutral tone in the summary section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aaron.somerville (talk • contribs) 19:38, 18 October 2020 (UTC)