User talk:Aartich

Welcome
Hello  and welcome to Wikipedia! I am Ukexpat and I would like to thank you for your contributions.  ''Click here to reply to this message.''  ukexpat (talk) 22:45, 25 November 2009 (UTC)

File permission problem with File:CCVD.JPG
Thanks for uploading File:CCVD.JPG I noticed that while you provided a valid copyright licensing tag, there is no proof that the creator of the file agreed to license it under the given license.

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 * I don't have OTRS access, however, as soon as they do get the correct e-mail w/permissions, an admin from there will be able to restore the image and apply the appropriate OTRS ticket number.  Skier Dude  ( talk ) 05:08, 4 December 2009 (UTC)

Combustion Chemical Vapor Deposition
Thank you for your contribution. It is a difficult task to write a wikipedia article and you did great. There are however several issues which need to be addressed:
 * Wikipedia (WP) standards are similar to (or stricter then) those of scientific publications. In particular, the claims of the article have to be supported by in-line reliable references. Unreferenced material may be removed any time. Please don't hesitate to contact me if any questions arise.
 * WP articles must keep neutral point of view. The article does look somewhat promotional. Many "capabilities" and "advantages" are not specific to CCVD. "Advantages" do look speculative without a firm support by reliable references.

Regards. Materialscientist (talk) 07:52, 29 November 2009 (UTC)


 * I agree with the above comments -- third party reliable sources must be cited to support notability and the tone needs to be worked on - at the moment the article could be seen as a veiled advertisement for nGimat and its process. But as Materialscientist has said, it's a good start! – ukexpat (talk) 15:45, 2 December 2009 (UTC)

Combustion chemical vapor deposition follow up
Thanks for the message on my talk page. As mentioned above, the problem is that the article concentrates too much on the NanoSpray process which could be seen as promoting nGimat. If you can add additional material, with references of course, about the other processes, that should deal with the issue. In addition, you need more references generally, to verify the notability of the subject. – ukexpat (talk) 00:23, 13 January 2010 (UTC)