User talk:Aashleyjjones

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Welcome to Wikipedia, Aashleyjjones! Thank you for your contributions. I am Wgolf and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Questions or type at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes ( ~ ); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Wgolf (talk) 21:11, 5 February 2015 (UTC)
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Greetings... Hello, Aashleyjjones, and  welcome to Wikipedia! 
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February 2015
Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a message letting you know that one or more of your recent edits to Mental breakdown has been undone by an automated computer program called ClueBot NG.


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 * The following is the log entry regarding this message: Mental breakdown was changed by Aashleyjjones (u) (t) ANN scored at 0.959621 on 2015-02-12T17:45:51+00:00 . Thank you. ClueBot NG (talk) 17:45, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

Glad you want to help, but...
Ashley,

I'm glad you're trying to learn how to use Wikipedia. New editors are always welcome! But I'm sad to say I've had to revert your latest edits to mental breakdown for several reasons: One of the problems is that you've chosen an article that doesn't really need any work. You might do better to choose one of the articles listed at Category:Articles needing cleanup, and see if you can improve them by addressing the concerns expressed in the cleanup template.
 * 1) You added a citation to this page, which is just a mirror site of Wikipedia. Many sites copy Wikipedia's content to fill up their pages. Since Wikipedia's content is free under the CC-BY-SA license, these sites are free to do so as long as they attribute Wikipedia as the source. But using such sites as sources doesn't really help. We'd need citations to reliable sources, and in the cases of articles dealing with medical conditions, the sourcing criteria are even more stringent.
 * 2) You've added material that is essentially redundant to the material already present. It looks like your writing just for the sake of having added words. That doesn't really improve the article at all.

I hope you continue to edit Wikipedia, learn the ropes, and become a strong contributor here. Feel free to ask me or any of the other editors questions. We're generally a pretty friendly bunch. (We try to be at least!) WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 12:44, 13 February 2015 (UTC)