User talk:Aatashkhan

Orthogenesis
Hi, I saw your edit to this article. I assume you're a student completing an assignment? If so, welcome. I have some news which I hope you won't find too disappointing. You will see that I have written a critique of the material on the article's talk page, followed after some thought by moving the material there. I've made quite detailed comments which I won't repeat here, except to say that there is certainly scope for working some of the material into the article, and I'm happy to lend a hand in that process as there are many aspects from the trivial (formatting, reference style, etc) to questions of overlap with other articles, relevance to this article, and organisation of material. All the best, Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:10, 7 December 2021 (UTC)