User talk:Aatiqanoman5683/sandbox

Aichakay26 (talk) 20:33, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Great use of pictures because it emphasizes the mechanism of the disease.
 * Prognosis should be capitalized because it is part of a heading, grammar should be checked.
 * No Research section, the reader should know what research is being done on Eclabium.
 * In text citations should be added to the wiki page so reader can automatically go to references.

--Sweiner02 (talk) 17:44, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
 * The abstract needs more information. It should provide enough brief summary to understand the important pieces of your condition.
 * This needs some grammar editing. There are some sentence fragments and other issues.
 * Good use of images that are already available!
 * Describing the core actual issue in signs and symptoms would be helpful.
 * This needs a LOT more citations. Every paragraph should have at least one citation.
 * This also would benefit from more links to other articles.
 * Some of your references are not properly formatted. Use Wikipedia's citation tool.

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Great job on the formatting and content for your disease One suggestion would be to find a visual diagram that you can put in the causes/mechanisms section, if you are having difficulty finding a graphic image of someone who actually has Eclabium. Maybe elaborate a bit more in the epidemiology section, which countries are the most affected Maybe you can discuss or explain a little more about the ABCA12 gene under the prevention/diagnosis section Jbarbeau1300 (talk) 19:51, 12 November 2020 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aatiqanoman5683 (talk • contribs)