User talk:Abaasa1

Nataliey Bitature
I've seen your email. I think you may not be fully aware of what Wikipedia is (and isn't) about. It's not here to host Nataliey Bitature's biography as written by her or her staff, but to be an encyclopaedic article based on reliable, verifiable, sources that are independent of the subject. The additions by are failing this requirement and look to be mostly promotional. It would also appear that in relation to Nataliey Bitature and Patrick Bitature, both you and have a conflict of interest that you are not declaring, at best, and at worst you are undertaking undeclared paid editing. I suggest that neither of you attempt to edit either article and instead restrict your involvement with these two articles to making edit requests via the article talk pages. Nthep (talk) 14:22, 4 April 2022 (UTC)


 * Hello,
 * So what exactly am I pointing out wrong in editing Nataliey Bitature's biography.  LoritaShepherd (talk) 14:52, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
 * @LoritaShepherd You're bigging up her achievements with peacock terms and meaningless asides. As examples is a complete set of peacock terms and we don't need the minutiae of what Musana Carts does.  These are not the only examples, there are numerous others.  You are also failing to provide citations or providing misleading citations. Examples, in the section on her education only the statements relating to Keele University are referenced. There is a statement that she is managing director of the Protea Hotel which ostensibly has three citations. However none of these three sources verify that she is MD of the hotel.
 * Also you really must declare your conflict of interest and whether or not you are being remunerated (directly or indirectly) for making these edits. Nthep (talk) 16:31, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your feedback. Today we declared conflict of interest and instead of overhauling we made a slight change. This change was still reverted. Is there something else that we are doing wrong? Abaasa1 (talk) 11:09, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Stop using Bitature's biography as your source. If it's not written in independent sources then don't use it. Nthep (talk) 19:14, 8 April 2022 (UTC)