User talk:Abagg1/sandbox

Article Review
After reviewing your sandbox on Wikipedia, it is clear that you need sources cited within your text for your edits. This is very vital for Wikipedia because you din't want to be caught plagiarizing. It is also clear to me that you need a references list for your sources so viewers know where to find your information. These are quick and easy fixes of which will take you 10 minutes or so. I would say the don't mention the article in your explanation but rather cite it at the end of your sentence. You have good view points but try and organize them a little more so you know what source to edit into what article. Your points for the most part are very neutral which is good because you don't want to favor a particular side over the other. I'd also say put some of the things that you state into your own words. It seems that you have pulled text directly from the article. Instead, try to paraphrase the information more so it is more of your words than theirs. Other than that, very well done. Sbovi1 (talk) 17:59, 4 December 2018 (UTC)sbovi1