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Abahado's peer review of Caudal Cell Mass
While overall informative, here are some points you may want to consider: -Check your first line, you wrote "after after" rather than after. -consider "why does it say 'after primary neuralation has taken place, or after the cranial portion of the spinal cord has developed'? Does it mean that this formation can occur after either event?" -Consider adding a Wiki link to "neurlation". I am positive there is something on the process, -The overall grammatical structure of the "Roles in Disease" can be improved upon, as well as the flow for the reader. Though it is informative.