User talk:Aballison/Loyalist (American Revolution)/Hannah.Leanne.Moore Peer Review

User talk:Aballison/Loyalist (American Revolution)/Hannah.Leanne.Moore Peer Review,

Reference to Hannah.Leanne.Moore Peer Review,

"Everything in this article is relevant to the article topic! Your addition is excellent, but the transition from your added portion, into the next is a little awkward. Maybe the portion of the article that reads, " In fact, many women were punished in this way." should be removed, or edited. The article is neutral!"

Thank you for the recommendation. I believe that a better transition would make the article flow more. I will plan on working on a good transition between the ideas.

Aballison (talk) 01:12, 2 March 2022 (UTC) <ref