User talk:Abbigail Ely/sandbox/newsandbox

Religion and Personality
I would be careful on the first sentence if you don't have a specific citation for that line. It looks as if you're drawing a conclusion between religion and personality rather than letting the reader draw a conclusion for themselves on the relationship between the two. I would also add a quote to the last sentence or state where your findings where for the fact that religiosity deals primarily with Christianity.

Five Factor Model
I think the organization you have for the FFM is much better than the first paragraph they have stating each aspect of it. This helps the reader understand what each aspect means in a more concise way along with allowing the reader to have the ability to dive more into what each factor is.

Religion and Paranormal Beliefs
You bring up some good points with the source you have, but I would look into possibly trying to find a another newer source since that one is about 13 years old at this point. I know it could be difficult looking into it and finding research on it so it's just a suggestion. Also I don't know if you plan on doing this but the last sentence of that paragraph has a line where the person drew a conclusion on their own along with stating that it 'probably' isn't related. I would take that out so that again the reader can draw their own conclusions with the facts they have.

Final remarks
You two are doing a good job with the edits that you have already. I would also try and look into other aspects you can edit; this is a pretty lengthy wiki and it definitely has a lot of room to grow. You cite a lot our resources however out of all of your edits you only cite two sources. I feel like with the sources you have right now you can help this page develop a lot more. I hope this helps and good job! Zjt2n8 (talk) 22:07, 28 March 2020 (UTC)