User talk:Abbyecole/sandbox

Great evaluation, Abby! You've taken the time to read and think about the anti-environmentalism article, and have identified elements that need to be improved upon. I also like how you formatted the evaluation. I think your group is going to produce an excellent draft. Griffyn1987 (talk) 18:43, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

Peer-Review Response:

I would like to thank Farhan for the review of what I have done so far in my article draft! Alongside noting what they thought was good about my draft they gave a few suggestions about how I could improve my article. First, they suggested I should add pictures. I did a search a media search through Wikipedia to see if there was any symbols or images associated with anti-environmentalism but being that it is a broad subject, I do not think there are any images that would fit in appropriately with the article. Secondly, they suggested that I provide some information regarding the history of China. I definitely think adding a couple of sentences about China's environmental policy history is a good idea, but in regard to the history of China, I’m afraid adding too much information would stray far away from the main topic of anti-environmentalism itself. Regarding Farhan’s critiques of absent references in the paragraphs about Donald Trump and Poland, those sections were worked on my partner Emma, so I cannot make any changes in those sections. When Emma and I begin to start wrapping up our article, we will certainly collect our sources used and list them in a detailed bibliography at the end, opposed to the simple footnotes that are listed there now. Otherwise, I would like to thank Farhan for the compliments they made towards the work we have done so far, and for the changes they suggested. It helped me reflect on the work done and consider some things that I otherwise wouldn’t have thought of. Abbyecole (talk) 19:34, 16 March 2019 (UTC)

(I posted the response here and in my user page Talk page, where Farhan posted the peer-review)