User talk:Abbykadabby 22/sandbox

Evaluating an Article
The article on cricket flour should be easy to improve if you follow the suggestions you made (neutral language and more sources/content). Go ahead and start collecting sources. Post them in the sandbox. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:51, 4 April 2019 (UTC)
 * The three sources you posted look really good. NPR and The Farmer's Almanac are well established sources that don't have a direct connection to the topic, so hopefully they treat it in a pretty neutral way. The third source appears to be a manufacturer or seller of cricket flour, so their info will most likely be of promotional nature, but it could still be valuable. You're done with research! Now find the essential info in your sources and post a summary in the sandbox. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:58, 8 April 2019 (UTC)

Editing an Article
It's hard for me to see what you copied from the existing article and what you added, but you seem to be going in the right direction. Finish up your proposed changes and then add them to the mainspace. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:59, 24 April 2019 (UTC)

Final Assessment
Thank you for such a substantial contribution to the article on cricket flour. It still reads too much like an advertisement, but you added relevant information, new sections, and sources. Good job. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:40, 6 May 2019 (UTC)