User talk:Abbymar1416/Dendera Temple complex

Potential Edits
I have added the following potential edits to my sandbox:


 * Small edits for sections within the body of the article
 * Bibliography

Abbymar1416 (talk) 04:53, 18 February 2023 (UTC)

To my sandbox for this article I have done the following: Abbymar1416 (talk) 01:01, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Changed some of the wording in the Description section and added some new content
 * Added information on the Temple of Hathor and the other structures found around the complex
 * Added internal links to other Wikipedia articles
 * Cleaned up some verbiage and grammar issues.

Internal Links
Links to other articles added to this one:

·      “Barque” is linked to the Wikipedia page titled “Barque.”

·      “Isis” is linked to the Wikipedia page titled “Isis.”

·      “Edfu” is linked to the Wikipedia page titled “Temple of Edfu.”

Other articles linked to this one:

·       The Wikipedia page titled “List of ancient Egyptian sites” now has a link to this page under the sub-heading “Upper Egypt” labeled “Nome 6: The crocodile / Dendera.” / See:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_ancient_Egyptian_sites

·       The Wikipedia page titled “Sphinx” now has a link to this page under the heading “Egypt” at the bottom of the section. / See: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sphinx#Egypt

Please note that this will be expanded upon as I improve upon the article. Abbymar1416 (talk) 03:05, 5 April 2023 (UTC)

Contributions As of 04/28
For this article I have made the following changes:


 * I have added information regarding the history of the construction of the complex in the "Description" section, as well as definitions for certain elements featured at the complex.
 * I have added information regarding "dead" deities that are represented at the complex and how they tie into another archaeological site.
 * I have added information regarding the theft of the Dendera Zodiac.
 * I have added information about the Dendera Light and how Harsomtus is related to Hathor.
 * I have added information under the "Roman mammisi" section regarding the presence of the Romans in Egypt.
 * I have added a section titled "Recent Discoveries" to highlight the sphinx that was found at the site by archaeologists in March of 2023.
 * Throughout the article I have improved sentence structure and overall grammatical styling.

To improve this article, I would like to look for more information to put under the "Tourism" section. The information in this section does not have a source to back it up, and I was only able to find a blog that mentioned the tourist falling from the roof. In addition to this, I think it would be a good idea to incorporate a labeled diagram of the Hathor Temple as opposed to just listing the "layout elements." I don't know if this is something that could be found online or created, but it might be a cool thing to add. Information on the different crypts at the Hathor Temple could be another addition to the article - who was buried in these crypts? Abbymar1416 (talk) 19:40, 28 April 2023 (UTC)