User talk:Abbynw

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Hello, Abbynw, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Short feedback
Hi, Abbynw. I made some small changes to your article (mostly updating references). I think what you have there is valuable but as one of your classmates noted it needs a "lead" section which summarizes the article and introduces the topic. I'm also not sure if the sections you've left empty are ones you plan to expand. If not, you can delete those empty sections before you move the draft to Legal standards for health care availability in the United States (note the capitalization and the specificity to the US, which should be explicit in the article title). I hope this helps. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:04, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

Reproductive health care for incarcerated women in the United States
Hi, Abbynw. I think your article is nearly ready to be moved into the mainspace. The only change that needs to be made is the Cancer and General Gynecological Care and Perceptions of Physicians sections make judgments in the voice of the encyclopedia, like " An informant at a prison in California described how doctors are discouraged from acting as an advocate for a prisoner-patient, as a doctor in the free world might"--this is true, but when writing a dispassionate summary that's not how we would describe the problem. I think both of those sections are also too heavy with quotes from individuals. We want to be able to include a few to give a sense of their perspective, but a reader is much better served by a short summary of the problems and situation. Good work so far, I hope this helps! Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:10, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Reproductive health care for incarcerated women in the United States has been accepted
 Reproductive health care for incarcerated women in the United States, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Ringbang (talk) 02:15, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
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