User talk:Abbyprodente/Nia (fitness)

Hi Abby, I read your article on NIA fitness and noticed a few things to possibly work on/ correct.

In your body paragraph under "What is NIA?", the reference link doesn't appear to be correct - "What is Nia? : The Center for Nia & Yoga". nia-yoga.com. Retrieved 2022-02-15.

The information in the paragraph about Debbie Rosa is a good biography but it reads like a fiction book character being introduced. I'm not exactly sure a better approach to giving background to Debbie but that's just something to consider. While reading about the Nine Movements of NIA, I felt that the long paragraph is hard to read and keep track of the different movements. To help with this maybe a bullet point list or different formatting could help with this?