User talk:Abduabbadi/Water pollution in Canada/Elizabethmattioli Peer Review

I know you talk about Canada and Montreal and their affects on water pollution, but maybe you can talk about America and how Americans effect water pollution as well. I see that you talk about how it flowed to the United States. Also, maybe after you say how there were raw sewage dumped into the harbor and there was some sewage discharge unknowingly when sewer lines were cut during construction, you can say how it effected the community around them. But overall, I think this is very good. 23:57, 1 December 2021 (UTC)Elizabethmattioli (talk)