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Jmiragha (talk) 15:36, 28 November 2018 (UTC) More explanation is required for these lines: The governments of SWF's commit to follow certain rules: Accumulation rule (what portion of revenue can be spent/saved) Withdraw rule (when the Government can withdraw from the fund) Investment (where revenue can be invested in foreign or domestic assets)

Link the "Debt-to-Equity ratio" to the existing page on the Wikipedia, and explain the meaning of the ratio to the audience in: The regulated debt to equity ratio held by these funds is 1:10.

Replace the repetitive words, link the phrase "Financial Markets" to the existing page at the Wikipedia: Such risks subsequently poses further risks to the financial markets.

Punctuation and grammar error in the sentence "As an asset pool such as the SWFs continue to expand", correction is "As the asset pool, such as the SWFs, continues to expand".

Waleeda2018 (talk) 15:45, 28 November 2018 (UTC)There is a lot of jargon in this text, so either further information or linking could be beneficial.

Try to word the following sentence in a different way so that you could reference the list of reasons. For example: The growth of sovereign wealth funds is attracting close attention due to the following reasons: You might want to be specific about who's attention SWF is attracting. You also need to add more sources. Fmoahmed (talk) 15:51, 28 November 2018 (UTC)