User talk:Abenaowusua3/Abuse

Ideas for Improvement
Your concepts and improvements to this article are great!

I think one thing that could help would be to add a source or two to the lead paragraph and the later body paragraph on child abuse. Citing your sources will improve your credibility and audience's comprehension and further study.

Happy editing! :) Marsmorg (talk) 17:42, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

lead section
The beginning sentence in the lead where it states,  This article is about...  seems a little informal. It's best to get to the point and begin with what abuse is. After the definition of abuse, you can add a citation after the sentence. You add a citation by making sure the cursor is at the end of the sentence. Then, hit the  cite  button on the top of your sandbox. If you want to add a book, you can click on  automatic  and put it the ISBN. All of the information for your book citation will be added into the references section of your sandbox after you hit  generate . However, you can add the information for the reference you want to use by hitting  Manual  and add the information yourself. I hope this information is useful and can help you cite in your sand box because it seemed like you were having trouble with it. Overall, I think this is a very interesting topic to read about. Joannaolsen12 (talk) 17:46, 28 October 2022 (UTC)