User talk:Abigail Osunde/sandbox

Abigail's Olodumare Review
After reviewing both the current article and what is posted in her user sandbox, it is easy to determine that everything Abigail mentioned as something which needs to be added to the article are all very relevant to the topic of Olodumare. Furthermore, all of her recommended edits are neutral and seem to adjust the article so it represents Olodumare properly.

The only place I think improvement may be needed is within the links she provided to make the article more reliable. Specifically I think that the ezproxy.rcc.edu links should be replaced by the direct link to the article, because I am not sure anyone outside of students and educators at RCC have access to the library's files.

Other than that I think this is a great starting point to begin an edit to the Olodumare article :)

Radroni21 (talk) 14:13, 19 October 2018 (UTC)