User talk:Abigail bowman/sandbox

Peer Review
Aflores6 (talk) 18:11, 12 April 2017 (UTC) Great information! Looks like you really did the research!

Wiki Draft Comments
1. Why are there endnotes at beginning of article?

2. fix endnote 3; first endnote needs pg range, last one is incomplete

3. explain what you mean by "soft form of salsa"

4. change "sets apart" to "is distinct from"

5. explain "softer orchestra"

6. "It has been the most commercially successful form of salsa in the last 20 years and is most popular in high end dance clubs as well as radio stations. " where and when?

7. word choice - "severe beating"

Melaniehuska (talk) 22:25, 16 April 2017 (UTC)