User talk:Abollman2/sandbox

Peer Review
Hi,

Your work is very lovely. It'd better if you could possibly add some examples of BTS advertising for some brands. For example, I remember they were the advertising representatives for Seoul Tourism in 2017. They signed the contract before they won the Billboard award, and the corresponding department earned an unexpected amount of profits. I believe there is source for that. Overall, I enjoy your work very much.

MEILING WU

-Second Peer Review- Hi, this is Jessica Rogoff. I think that the article is really great so far and I like the amount of statistics that were used and sourced! The article could possibly go into more detail about what groups the company is currently in control of, and how much that affects the company's worth. You could also go into depth about the owners of the company and how they got to this point, or how the popularity or value of the company affects the industry. You already have a great amount of detail though! Jrogoff2 (talk) 14:53, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

Great. Your readers will appreciate how well this article is sourced and detailed. Just have two minor comments: 1) it would be much better if you could add a bit of more detail on Bang Shi-hyeok, as he has been quite frequently covered in media. It’s not necessary to go deep into his biography per se, but would love to see the way he has produced BTS in the way he does. 2) could you also add a US dollar equivalent in your first paragraph as well? Well done. HK Hkim856 (talk) 17:44, 18 October 2018 (UTC)