User talk:Abrault/TGFB1I1

Peer Review
Hi! I like how you added an additional sentience to the model organisms section of the article. Maybe include a few more sentences on why TGFB1I1 is important for humans. I think you did a great job improving the article and that you included more references and additional reading sources. Milsapb (talk) 17:20, 9 November 2022 (UTC)

Response To Milsapb
Hello. You may have misunderstood what I have written or you may have went to the article instead as I did not add any sentence to the model organisms section. The section labeled "to place after the existing starting sentence" is to be put after the first sentence of the article and the section labelled "function" is to be a brand new section. Let me know if there is any more clarification needed. Abrault (talk) 17:30, 14 November 2022 (UTC)


 * Oh! Thank you for clarifying as that makes much more sense now.. I think adding an additional sentence to the opening statement would create a stronger introduction for the article. Also adding an additional section labelled "function" would be beneficial to the article as well, as it doesn't contain much information on TGFB11. Milsapb (talk) 21:02, 15 November 2022 (UTC)