User talk:Acarmona124/sandbox

To Whom It May Concern,

Hello. I am a university student seeking to develop and revise this particular article as part of a course assignment. In order to prevent possible misunderstandings I am leaving this talk post to introduce my username for any it concerns regarding the article's revisions, changes, etc. Edits will include an expansion/revision of the lead section, and addition of increased subcategories such as Characteristics, History, Tourism, and more. Expansions of existing categories will also be expanded, along with additional citations and references to accompany these edits. Thank youAcarmona124 (talk) 22:26, 16 November 2016 (UTC)

Page review
Hey Alex! you did a really great job coving the history and modern aspects of Olvera. My only suggestions for addition would be more information about the modern culture and tourism. Also you could use more sources further down in the article. I thought the controversy was really interesting and I liked how you brought it into your lead section. I think some descriptions of the events and celebrations that happen on the street would be really interesting, perhaps even deserving of their own section! Mk edwards (talk) 23:04, 18 November 2016 (UTC)