User talk:Accidentalskydiver/sandbox

You are a cool kid Accidental Skydiver 20:51, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

Editing suggestions
I think you have done a really good job researching and collecting information on cultural and sexual objectification. The fact that you are looking at a broad range of cultural references is crucial because you are making sure you are looking at cultural objectification from various viewpoints to give the reader a well-rounded view. Although, I feel as if the section on sexual objectification needs to have more substance. I think there are a lot of articles out there that discuss this. For example, I think this Huffington Post article would be a interesting one to include in the discussion of sexual objectification. http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/07/25/women-and-objectification_n_1701275.html CherryBerry1727 (talk) 21:14, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

There's a spelling mistake in the second sentence, I assume the intent was to say object, "The author says that people must remember that the onbject is a portion..." CherryBerry1727 (talk) 21:27, 30 May 2013 (UTC)