User talk:Acechen0/Addictive behavior

You may want to indicate that “there is research showing” as opposed to referring to the fact that the information is coming from a singular article with regards to the personality traits. This might give it a more encyclopedic tone and people can see that it is from a specific study in the citation. “addictions might give an individual a sense of power, confidence, endorsement, or other feelings that they might not attain in their real life. “ I think it is important to acknowledge that these addictions are a part of people's real lives, but they may be less prone to experience these in other aspects of their lives.