User talk:Acestep/sandbox

Amanda's peer review: I thought this was well done, really easy to follow the information, no real opinion it all clearly came from sources. In the first part when you say "some view" if anything I would try to reword that to say instead maybe "Exocannibalism can be viewed as..." to take the people out of the sentence. Make sure you add in the links during the final part to other wiki articles (wari and fiji would be good places for those to be added in). In your paragraph about Wari you say "Wari in South America, are" you don't need that comma there. Great work! Really interesting to read about too.

Aeboornazian (talk) 19:58, 16 November 2017 (UTC)

CJ Ott Peer Review Great, interesting topic, very easy to follow. Not complete yet but a very good start could maybe use more background information and definitions to define what you are talking about supported by references and examples. but an overall great start! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cjott (talk • contribs) 18:59, 17 November 2017 (UTC)