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Alex, great job on your article. First, I have to commend you on the thoroughness of the piece. It covered everything important subject dealing with Iraqi refugees that I could think of and, for the most part, in great detail. I thought your section "official responses" was particular well done and thorough. The only addition I could see making would be to add a separate section or perhaps just an addition to your "profiles, origins,and locations" section on the various Iraqi minorities that have settled in Syria. You definitely mention them but I would love to see more specifics on the various groups. Other than that, I made a few grammatical edits but nothing substantial. Nice Job. -Matt

Also, thanks for your comments. I have a large update to my page but was unable to post it today. It should be up tomorrow and I think the revision will satisfy your comments. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mrc78 (talk • contribs) 04:31, 18 November 2010 (UTC)