User talk:Acheemara/sandbox

Professor, for the case updates, I think it's good to have because it provides a short summary of what was going on and how the case developed from time to time. For picture, I used the picture from SAR website. I will add a reference. --Acheemara (talk) 19:16, 27 June 2020 (UTC)

I wonder if the Case Updates section is necessary, much of it repeats information that was above. I have corrected some of the language, added a couple of links, a section on External Links. It would be nice to get an image, but am not sure if this is possible --Calfux (talk) 17:02, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

You need to add more citations now, the page is looking good --Calfux (talk) 12:52, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

Public and Advocacy Campaigns (Internal use only)
PS. I decided to delete university advocacy (in details) because I cannot really find the good reference to support this. Anyway, we can use this section to talk about university activities/campaign in general.

Work Progress Update Wikipedia Page

Right now, we have almost all information. There are only a couple of things to finalise (for English page): language revision and reference adding. For Italian Wikipedia page, as discussed, after the English version is finalised, we are going to use the Wikipedia auto-translation. Our Italian colleagues will elaborate the language and we can then finalised the Italian version page.

Zoom Events

We have discussed some topics related to the activity date, possible topics to be presented, guests, and take-away message and actions. We can discuss further together in the meeting.

Letters to organisations

We have completed the first draft on the contents and it is during the process of elaboration.

Social Network

We would like to create some twitter, instagram, and facebook fan pages to share some updates about our advocacy activities, information about the case, and to invite the public to engage in some activities such as invitation to online conference sessions, online flash mob, etc.

more comments
Hi everyone - the page is getting better and better - just wanted to say our conversations should be on this page. I think some more internal links should be added (to other wikipedia pages) and also some more external references --Calfux (talk) 08:02, 4 June 2020 (UTC)

Feedback on page
Well done you have done great work so far - I think the structure of the page is good, only the section on university campaigns which is not necessary on this page as these campaigns are not high profile enough to have external references and so will be deleted by Wikipedia editors. The sections you have already done need references to reliable sources(even more than one) after every sentence you have written as Marco said. --Calfux (talk) 06:06, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

Group Comments/Remarks/Notes
- COMMENT from Francesca Helm - I am not sure that university campaigns can be included here - unless the media make reference to them. Remember every sentence needs to be referenced, and you need to make links to what wikipedia considers reliable sources - ANSWER to Professor - we are thinking about making a reference to SAR announcements and some websites publishing about university campaigns. Definitely, we will be aware of references and reliable sources. Thank you - Guys, I forgot how to insert bibliography. Can you advise?