User talk:Acidgirltogo/sandbox

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Spelling/grammar: Meets standard It should be "in the form of a vibrant" instead of "in the form a vibrant". Also, in the last paragraph of the main body, the sentence "And has collaborated with" is a fragment. It has no subject.

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You did a great job. It goes into great detail. The research seems very thorough. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Arakuresacred (talk • contribs) 03:51, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

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 * Note: Add 'the' to "with [the] center of focus in Lisbon". I don't think you need a comma after "started as a coup". Add 'ed' in "is primarily government sanction[ed]". "Out-reach" doesn't need a dash, just one word.

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 * Note: Nice job writing about the criticism of street art without sounding like you supported one side or the other.

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 * Note: I think that it would help readability if you added a subheading in the first portion of your draft.

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 * Note: Just a little thing, but I don't think you need "and all of Portugal" in the first line, since you make this clear in the next few sentences.

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Great job on this, it was interesting to read about, and was definetly new information for me. Thanks, NiciaD (talk) 04:35, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

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 * Note: "I would make the first introductory sentence stronger, adding details/ description words of humanisms rise in Nuremberg ===

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 * Note: Good job on the blue links in your contribution. ===

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Meets Standard I like how your contriubtion was written in chronological order of events.

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Nearly Meets Standard Some grammar mistakes.

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Nearly Meets standard I think the organization should be more clear, for example, adding some sub-title to show the main idea of the paragraph.

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Nearly Meets Standard I think that you should add more information about the history of Steer Art in Lisbon because in the introduction paragraph, you mention some information about that.