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the cherokee legend of aya
Aya, the cherokee legend, was a woman made by cherokee elders, she was made from clay and the elders brought her to life. She was beatiful, as she had to be to do her job. Her job was to lure the demon Kalona into the earth and trap him. The reason the cherokee woman wanted him trapped was because everyone thought he was a god from the heavens at first. He raped the woman of the cherokee village and killed the men. He was a threat and the only thing that could save the cherokee people was this clay woman, Aya. She came to life and lured him into a cave and it collapsed, his weakness was the earth. He was supposed to stay with the sky, because he was part raven. The wemon he raped had awful creatures unstead of children, they had the body of men and the heads of ravens. At a sertain age they killed their mothers prove they were worthy enough for their fathers love. They were awful and the village became small. It had to be stopped. After Aya trapped aya she held hi in her arms until she fadded away into nothingness. Thats how the cherokee legend ends. It is said that the raven mockers (the children of Kalona) either killed themselves, buried themselves with their father, or began to go into hiding. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.138.62.59 (talk) 00:58, 9 April 2012 (UTC)

Inline citations at Martyn Underhill
Please take a look at Inline citations to learn how to format them properly. If you want I can format the first one to show you how to do it, if you pause editing the article for long enough. --  role player 09:42, 9 April 2012 (UTC)


 * I have formatted the lead reference, and placed it after the main fact it is referencing, as opposed to before. --  role player 09:52, 9 April 2012 (UTC)