User talk:Acp741/Bucking

134.153.73.238 (talk) 23:30, 16 November 2019 (UTC) Peer review (MF; 134.153.73.238 (talk) 23:31, 16 November 2019 (UTC)): - Nice style of writing. Avoid using "we' in your sentences as Wikipedia articles are passive and have a neutral tone. An example from your outline was "A main reason we see bucking in domesticated animals". This sentence could be change to "Bucking is observed in domesticated animals due to..." instead.

- Not enough sources cites. It would be great if you can find more sources on the topic. How prevalent is this behavior in domesticated animals? Where there studies experimenting with different stimuli to elicit this response?

- Headers to direct the reader to certain aspects you want to mention are greatly beneficial. Something like investigating 'bucking in Equids' as a section of its own and then having 'bucking in Bovids' would give the reader information on how this behavior is similar (or not) in two different taxa.