User talk:Acriggs18/Ebba Lund

Hey Alexa, I just peer reviewed your article. Thought it was extremely well written. Only comments I had were to maybe add a little more to the lead to give more of a brief description of the content of the article and the think about maybe sectioning the research section a little bit more. Keep up the good work my friend!Khdoyle18 (talk) 14:11, 6 March 2020 (UTC) here is the link to my peer review: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Acriggs18/Ebba_Lund/Khdoyle18_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review Khdoyle18 (talk) 14:11, 6 March 2020 (UTC)