User talk:Acrimin/English Market

=Evaluations for Edit 3=

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Expectations Few if any negligible errors. Pay attention to any red squiggly lines, though; they should be easy, like how "opportunity" corrects itself if you position your cursor after the y and press the spacebar.

Language
Meets Expectations Mostly dictionary-level. Try using more active verbs and less passive voice, like in the first sentence under ownership: "Cork City Council owns the market, but Aramark Property manages daily operations on the council's behalf."

Organization
Meets expectations. Good heading and subheadings.

Coding
Perfect I noticed you put the market's coordinates, added a picture, and added the templates at the bottom (although it's not immediately clear why both fishery templates are there, since the market sells many other things as well as seafood).

Validity
Nearly meets expectations. You say there was a special police force that "kept the starving" out of the market during the famine, but the article actually says the market had a special guard a century earlier, and during the famine police drove the migrants out of the city. There is no mention of whether the market was open or closed.

Completion
Nearly meets expectations. See sources and references below. Addresses all main points, and has at least nine paragraphs, though!

Relevance
Meet expectations. Little if any irrelevant content. Irrelevant sources, maybe, but I'll let the professor grade that.

Spelling/Grammar
Exceeds Expectations I didn't see any mistakes in this category

Language
Meets/Exceeds Expectations In the "ownership" section: "The market is owned by the Cork City Council, but the day to day operations Aramark Property on the council's behalf” I thought this sentence was missing something between operations and Aramark Property. For example, "but the day to day operations are run by Aramark Property on the council’s behalf”

Also in the "ownership" section: I was going to suggest that the singular sentence, "Cork City Council and the site's traders marked the market's 230th anniversary in August 2018” was a bit lonely and to add it into one of the other paragraphs but I don’t have a suggestion into how exactly to do that and I think it still works on its own so you can think about that but it totally works the way you have it too.

Organization
Exceeds Expectations Your subsections are very clear and concise.

Coding
Exceeds Expectations Your coding is all set and works as intended.

Validity
Exceeds Expectations Your information is factual

Completion
Exceeds Expectations Lots of information and MANY MANY sources! Great job!

Relevance
Exceeds Expectations All factual info about the market.