User talk:Actressshikha/sandbox

Hi

1) The article is not very long. This is good. It makes it easier to read and review.

2) The article contains words in bold. They are formatted incorrectly. The only thing that needs to be in bold is the name of the article subject in the first sentence:
 * "Shikha Thakur is an Indian Actress, modal singer. ..."

3) To make sections, use headings. They are marked by '==' before and after the heading name in the source, and are on a separate line.

4) References need to be provided inline and numbered, next to the sentence which they support. Please look how other articles do this, and read referencing for beginners. This allows the reader to check each sentence in the respective source, via the numbered citation.

5) Nouns do not need to be capitalised (such as 'Actress').

6) Year of birth needs to be provided.

7) "Following a modeling career" is vague. Please reword it to make it more specific.

8) "Shikha start her acting career." has a grammar error. You mean "Shikha started her acting career." (in past tense)

9) "She joined acting classes." - where? when? And according to whom? Citation is needed.

10) "She has a strong interest in Bollywood." According to whom? Citation is needed.

11) "Sikha is basically from New Delhi" According to whom? Citation is needed.

12) "Only of Sh. Rajkumar a professor in Merut University and Smt.Leela wati who is Lecturer in Delhi University." is difficult to read. Please reword. And according to whom? Citation is needed.

13) "Her schooling from Xavier Public School." → "She studied in Xavier Public School in 19XX to 20XX" (specify year, add citation)

14) "Completed M.A. ( Master’s degree in arts.) from Delhi University ." in what year? add citation

15) "She did fashion designing Basic form NIFT & Completed Air Hostess training From Frankfinn" add citation

16) "She is work loving person." according to whom? add citation, attribute ('according to XYZ, ...')

17) A lot of"She has done various Prints shoots, Catalogues .Shoots For various brands. She appeared in Chennai Fashion Weeks also. She did regular fashion Weeks. Shikha shoots fan several brand from India and out of India . She comes on several magazines cover page also.

''Other work:– In addition to work shikha did a lots of prints, Completed fashion weeks. A Few movies perfect also. She completed and tried lots of videos, Music Albums in which she sung herself. She start singing also. She is professionally singer with an Actress and Model. There are more music Albums which are continuously coming.''" is vague. Words like "various" -- which or how many? -- "several magazines cover page" -- which? -- indicate that the content needs to be clarified . Specify year and inline citation for everything.

17) I have not reviewed the rest of the article. Please work through the remaining two paragraphs looking for issues which are similar to the issues mentioned above.

Please resolve these issues and leave a message. Thank you. --Gryllida (talk) 06:06, 20 April 2018 (UTC)